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Old 13 Jun 2001, 19:58   #1
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Nightwork

Some lyrics I wrote some time ago...
Don´t laught, bitte!

The road without an end

He wants to go forever and ever
he wants to go thru whole his life.
But he was tooken back much to early
without a trace in no mansland.

That´s the road with no beginning
that´s the road without an end
That´s the road that lasts forever
and you will never find it again.

Thru a wall of cellphones ringing
thru a wall of netcontacts.
We find the answer, but have no question
the sky is blue, but the sun is gone.

That´s the road...

A girl is walking in her white dress
along the road without no goal
She can´t see it coming there
the circle that goes round and round

That´s the road...



-I love you dangerously-

Edited by - Avil on 09 Aug 2001 22:39:06
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Old 13 Jun 2001, 20:57   #2
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Lovely Avil! Thanks for sharing...I do like it..

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Old 13 Jun 2001, 21:56   #3
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its abit Alphaville style..its great!!do you have a melody to it also??

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Old 14 Jun 2001, 16:00   #4
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Oh Alphavillestyle, I like that...*lol*
Well, yes I have a melody for a part of the song, not the whole one though.

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Old 15 Jun 2001, 15:40   #5
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I like it! It would be nice song, I think...
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Old 09 Aug 2001, 21:48   #6
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Seems like I write everything in the night!

The blacknight scream

Beware when day meets darkness
Beware crossroads where they skulk
Beware when sun is gone from coldblue sky
You can´t control your destiny
it´s written in sand, in salt, in blood
Follow the path, don´t ever look back
the wonds are blowing, they´re chasing you

So beware the shivering sound of a silent child, the sound you feel but cannot hear
Beware of the gloomy places all made in gold, where this meets that, where up meets down, where you meet me
Remember to feel the blacknight scream

Beware of the terrible icy beauties, those tireless hunters, no mercy shown, attention forced
Beware when beauty meets beast, smiles exchanged, empty eyes, emotions gone
What you seek you will not find
it´s hidden in caves, in holes, in rivers
Deep, true emotions will glow like fire, travel far on magic sparks


-I love you dangerously-

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Old 07 Nov 2001, 22:17   #7
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Lonely heart

Alone, I lie, beneath my tree
on a rainy autumn's morn,
my love has left me here to bear
my sadness and his scorn,
Fields of wheat embrace my tree
as far as the eye can see,
A path remains, where my love did leave,
crying, he ran from me,
The bitter wind does chill my soul,
my heart screams out in fear,
Why has my love forsaken me?
Why is my love not here?
Beautiful leaves of amber and rose
fall gently at my side,
painful reminders of the boy I loved
and the angel to whom I cried,
Emotions overpower me
as tears stream down my face,
rejection scars my lonely heart,
For am I a disgrace?
Release me from this pain I feel
and from this lonely state,
I cannot bear this suffering,
its weight is far too great,
I beg of you forgive me dear,
I've caused you such distress,
I never meant to hurt you so,
don't love me any less,
For surely as the spring will come
to grant us nature's kiss,
so do I hope it shall return
my love whom I so miss


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Old 08 Nov 2001, 13:42   #8
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Wow!!!!!
Your lyrics are extremely great!!!!!!!!!
My favourite is blacknight scream, but the others are superb to.
road without end could bear some more work, I guess, then it yould be a masterpiece. And blSc? Just...art! Guardian is naive in a very beautiful way, a bit universal daddy-style. An lonely heart is so personal, poetic.
I wish I had your talent.
I really do love my own lyrics and give a lot on my abilities to write and express, but of more than 30songs written and ten produced there are not more than one or two good enough to be compared with yours.
F****** hell, I get deprimed when I compare them <img src=icon_smile_sad.gif border=0 align=middle><img src=icon_smile_clown.gif border=0 align=middle>
gimme more!

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Old 08 Nov 2001, 16:58   #9
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Hey, thanks.
But I don´t agree with you, my oppinion is that your lyrics and poems ate far much better than mine. Yours are so...I don´t know, they are very touching!

Blacknight scream was a poem we had to write in school from the very beginning, and it later envolved to some lyrics.

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Old 09 Nov 2001, 01:20   #10
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That you like my lyrics comforts me, but when I compare them with yours, I notice that I am expressing myself far more unconsciously: I let the poesy guide the sense (allright, eternal travellers is an exception, I`ll post "song of a siren" soon, then you`ll see what I mean). So the result is beautiful and maybe touching but not that strong.
Yours have a very poetic style but most of all a STRONG charactere: It`s a statement, a warning, a moaning, it is conrete, real.
So they touch me much more than mine ever did as they bring me to think about the world outside or feelings. Under this aspect, mine are much more "harmless".
When I see yours, I have songs, melodys, scenes in my head - they really inspire me.
Curious to your further works!
Are you planning to release any of those via a band/music project?

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