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Trent · 27 Apr 2001, 23:22

It says artwork here...where's all the artwork?? I know we are a talented bunch..come on guys, I will go first to break the silence: This is a song/poem I wrote not too long ago that someone suggested I put on here:

Listening to the Heavens

Me mind filled with dred.
I looked to the moon and it winked.
The stars circled me and whispered.
"Say her name!"
Then she kissed me..
We danced all hours of that night..
Her lips of satan and silk...
Her eyes twinkled with the stars...
The moon haloed her head..
Then she kissed me.
She glistened in the twilight..
She danced with the comets..
I gazed and I marveled at her..
Something I could not control..
She was an amazement to me.
How had she touched me so deep inside..
Then she kissed me.
When we said our goodbyes.
The sun shone off her morning light.
In her golden hair I was lost,
But I didn't care.
The moon and the stars introduced her to me.
The sun smiled and shown her to me.
Then she kissed me...
And she was gone...

<h6>cruising in cocktails...
Trent
</h6>

Stefan · 30 Apr 2001, 00:43

Congratulations, very good! I have a melody in my head, when I read this one, that´s a very good sign!

AV_defender · 02 May 2001, 14:37

well trentie,
willy is scanning some of my own made pics of marian etc..but i dont how its going..havent heard anything from him..

*The watcher of the scene*

wii · 02 May 2001, 14:55

Please give me a few days...

willy

Trent · 02 May 2001, 15:17

Thank you Stefan...I was begining to wonder if anyone had an opinion at all on it! I was begining to think everyone hated it or something and just being too nice to tell me...I appreciate that you put a reply to it...Thank you very much

<h6>cruising in cocktails...
<div align=left><img src=icon_smile_kisses.gif border=0 align=middle></div id=left>
Trent
</h6>

Adiville · 04 May 2001, 14:27

Defender,
Thats great !!!!!!
Im dying to see your artwork already.... <img src=icon_smile_wink.gif border=0 align=middle>

<h6>
------------------@ville - forever and ever------------------
Visit me at: http://members.nana.co.il/planet/euphoria</h6>

Trent · 04 May 2001, 15:00

Hmmmm...Only one person cared to comment on what I've written? Is it that bad?? =((

<h6>cruising in cocktails...
<div align=left><img src=icon_smile_kisses.gif border=0 align=middle></div id=left>
Trent
</h6>

Trent · 07 May 2001, 18:48

I know none of you care...but I'm posting another one anyway:

I just wrote this the other day so it's unamed as of yet

It came to me in a dream
A soft blue light then to green.
It covered me with such delight
I danced a paupers dance of joy at this sight.
Struggling and grasping out my hand.
Me body all wrecked and mamed from where I've been.
You took me up and made me a man.
You brought me joy and ectasy.
Cleaned me up and tended these wounds.
Turned me around and told me to be free.
Then all my red turned to green.
All that angered was now shattered.
You threw it aside like a babies ragdoll.
I thought this red would be too strong to conquer.
But this green is now encasing me proving me wrong.
You ate it up and finished it off like a hungry beast.
What a simple task you made this seem.
And now I wonder why I didn't always have this green.
C. Trenton MacLeod

<h6>Play with your own life, but don't play with mine...
Trent
</h6>

Avil · 07 May 2001, 21:42

That was a very beautiful poem trent,just like the first one. Seemed very close to you...or something...

-I love you dangerously-

Trent · 08 May 2001, 03:03

Thank you Avil I really appreciate the feedback!

<h6>Play with your own life, but don't play with mine...
Trent
</h6>

27 Apr 2001, 23:22	#1
Trent Dreamer Join Date: 22 Dec 2000 Location: Raleigh, NC, USA. Posts: 2,357	Artwork It says artwork here...where's all the artwork?? I know we are a talented bunch..come on guys, I will go first to break the silence: This is a song/poem I wrote not too long ago that someone suggested I put on here: Listening to the Heavens Me mind filled with dred. I looked to the moon and it winked. The stars circled me and whispered. "Say her name!" Then she kissed me.. We danced all hours of that night.. Her lips of satan and silk... Her eyes twinkled with the stars... The moon haloed her head.. Then she kissed me. She glistened in the twilight.. She danced with the comets.. I gazed and I marveled at her.. Something I could not control.. She was an amazement to me. How had she touched me so deep inside.. Then she kissed me. When we said our goodbyes. The sun shone off her morning light. In her golden hair I was lost, But I didn't care. The moon and the stars introduced her to me. The sun smiled and shown her to me. Then she kissed me... And she was gone... <h6>cruising in cocktails... Trent </h6>

30 Apr 2001, 00:43	#2
Stefan Dreamer Join Date: 06 Dec 2000 Location: Hamburg, Germany, Germany. Posts: 303	Congratulations, very good! I have a melody in my head, when I read this one, that´s a very good sign!

02 May 2001, 14:37	#3
AV_defender Exclusive Fanclub Member Join Date: 06 Dec 2000 Location: Arjeplog, , Sweden. Posts: 1,279	well trentie, willy is scanning some of my own made pics of marian etc..but i dont how its going..havent heard anything from him.. The watcher of the scene

02 May 2001, 14:55	#4
wii Dream Master Join Date: 07 Nov 2000 Location: Denmark Posts: 13,711	Please give me a few days... willy

02 May 2001, 15:17	#5
Trent Dreamer Join Date: 22 Dec 2000 Location: Raleigh, NC, USA. Posts: 2,357	Thank you Stefan...I was begining to wonder if anyone had an opinion at all on it! I was begining to think everyone hated it or something and just being too nice to tell me...I appreciate that you put a reply to it...Thank you very much <h6>cruising in cocktails... <div align=left><img src=icon_smile_kisses.gif border=0 align=middle></div id=left> Trent </h6>

04 May 2001, 14:27	#6
Adiville big in japan Join Date: 08 Nov 2000 Location: Israel Posts: 7,449	Defender, Thats great !!!!!! Im dying to see your artwork already.... <img src=icon_smile_wink.gif border=0 align=middle> <h6> ------------------@ville - forever and ever------------------ Visit me at: http://members.nana.co.il/planet/euphoria</h6>

04 May 2001, 15:00	#7
Trent Dreamer Join Date: 22 Dec 2000 Location: Raleigh, NC, USA. Posts: 2,357	Hmmmm...Only one person cared to comment on what I've written? Is it that bad?? =(( <h6>cruising in cocktails... <div align=left><img src=icon_smile_kisses.gif border=0 align=middle></div id=left> Trent </h6>

07 May 2001, 18:48	#8
Trent Dreamer Join Date: 22 Dec 2000 Location: Raleigh, NC, USA. Posts: 2,357	I know none of you care...but I'm posting another one anyway: I just wrote this the other day so it's unamed as of yet It came to me in a dream A soft blue light then to green. It covered me with such delight I danced a paupers dance of joy at this sight. Struggling and grasping out my hand. Me body all wrecked and mamed from where I've been. You took me up and made me a man. You brought me joy and ectasy. Cleaned me up and tended these wounds. Turned me around and told me to be free. Then all my red turned to green. All that angered was now shattered. You threw it aside like a babies ragdoll. I thought this red would be too strong to conquer. But this green is now encasing me proving me wrong. You ate it up and finished it off like a hungry beast. What a simple task you made this seem. And now I wonder why I didn't always have this green. C. Trenton MacLeod <h6>Play with your own life, but don't play with mine... Trent </h6>

07 May 2001, 21:42	#9
Avil The dream Join Date: 12 Nov 2000 Location: Malmö, Sweden Posts: 8,154	That was a very beautiful poem trent,just like the first one. Seemed very close to you...or something... -I love you dangerously-

08 May 2001, 03:03	#10
Trent Dreamer Join Date: 22 Dec 2000 Location: Raleigh, NC, USA. Posts: 2,357	Thank you Avil I really appreciate the feedback! <h6>Play with your own life, but don't play with mine... Trent </h6>