03 Mar 2012, 17:17 | #1 |
Cusp of the Millenium
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Some clumsy lyrics from me
Well, someone in Polish forum gave me an idea of writing song named "Catching Rays of Giant" from name of latest album. I wrote these clumsy lyrics (but quite good for my age; I'm 12):
I thought there’s no way for escape But now I see I was wrong Strange landscapes in the rising sun are going to stay longer in my head. Isn’t it wonderful that we are free? Let’s take some shining daystar We chased sad shadows away And found our place on Earth chorus: And we’re catching rays on Giant We’re running away from gray life People can say what they want But we don’t think about going back We’re sitting among the ruins Nobody can see our happiness We’re looking on the blue sky Early clouds are flying lazily over us Isn’t it wonderful that we are free? Let’s take some shining daystar We chased sad shadows away And found our place on Earth chorus Thank you, Dreamscapes, for opening up new dreamscapes to this young soul. |
03 Mar 2012, 17:35 | #2 |
Party nut
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As the worst lyrics writer myself I've always been jealous of others that are able to do this. And you're only 12, writing in english too - I say bravo to you !!
~~ Ријaнa [love2] Алфaвил ~ ~You gotta fight, for your right to party~ |
03 Mar 2012, 18:28 | #3 |
Cusp of the Millenium
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Thank you :)
Thank you, Dreamscapes, for opening up new dreamscapes to this young soul. |
03 Mar 2012, 18:44 | #4 |
Some Kind Of Angel
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Clumsy? No way, don't think that I will be able to do that! Great work!
You can do just what you wanna You can kill or you can die Be a beggar or a princess But you'll never lose your style Ephemere - Fallen Angel |
13 Sep 2014, 14:01 | #5 |
Cusp of the Millenium
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Well... Please don't kill me...
I've just got a little courage to write a short poem. I wrote many more during my absence on that topic, but... Well. This one came up into my mind after some news and listening to London Sky. I think that the poem's topic is quite easy to guess. Keep trying. Somebody sang that crows go west But apparently they turned east Again ignored advise: "The best Is not to wake the asleep beast" Some people now fear an internal war Knowing that both sides are no angels And the beast show us its middle finger Against our waving a wooden sable Thank you, Dreamscapes, for opening up new dreamscapes to this young soul. |
13 Sep 2014, 14:25 | #6 |
Dreamer
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Wow..that's really good! Very talented! Have you ever considered being a writer? You would be great that!!
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13 Sep 2014, 16:23 | #7 |
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Nicely done. You're gifted.
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14 Sep 2014, 10:47 | #8 |
Cusp of the Millenium
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Thank you Nicole and Mumu!
Once I did.... but barely any writer has got enough sells to live from that Thank you, Dreamscapes, for opening up new dreamscapes to this young soul. |
14 Sep 2014, 12:21 | #9 |
Themaestro'sgirl
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I agree with everyone else: Very talented, especially for your age.
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